Phew, and there we go- the finish of A Stranger in Paradise, the culmination of my work… thus far! Even as soon as I’d finished A Serpent in Zion, I’d started thinking about this story a lot- but it changed quite substantially in the year and a half between writing A Serpent in Paradise and starting on A Stranger in Paradise. The Prester John and Paradise aspects were fairly set, but my initial thinking had involved a US accountant being sent to Prester John, and discovering that he was Famine’s pawn; I had this idea that he’d be a power-stealing kind of guy, but this wound up becoming more Nash’s hat, and so I decided to tie together Betty into it.
Betty, herself, was interesting to write for this; Putting her out of her place of power to have her face a challenge she couldn’t just claw her way through. Well, not until she got to those sandwiches. It was also interesting to tie up the Jack and Jill plot; this marks the first time I’ve had a plot-line stretching between two stories. I hope seeing them get their asses kicked was satisfying to you readers out there.
And of course, remember. People are strongest when they’re together.
So, onto the character poll! Usual rules apply, vote for as many characters as you like; I can’t promise it will guide my future writing, but it may give me thoughts. http://www.strawpoll.me/13574403
And for my more esoteric poll- Do you want the world to change? Or do you want it to stay the way it is? http://www.strawpoll.me/13569952
As per usual, if you have questions you want to answer, ask them here, or e-mail them to firstname.lastname@example.org. Remember, your questions- no matter how foolish they may seem- matter a great deal to me. I like to make sure my work is understandable. If there are theories you have, lingering questions remaining behind, or things you’d like to know more about, ask; and you may receive!
Next up is a short story from the perspective of Jenny Nishi, on what it’s like to be an immortal goddess.
4 thoughts on “A Stranger in Paradise Afterthoughts”
The character poll seems to be “pick one” instead of multiple picks 😦
Whoops- Fixed, put up a new poll. For reference, the votes so far had been 2 for Jormungandr, 1 each for Fetu Miller, Baron Samedi, Jack and Jill, Bella, and Odysseus.
Mostly fixed; Jormungandr is now missing (I picked Jormungandr the first time around).
Dang it; Well, I’m going to leave it as is to avoid any more destruction of votes. Let me be blunt; I am absolutely going to write more about Jormungandr regardless. 😀